Thursday 28 February 2013

'Sweet Revenge' Script

SWEET REVENGE
EXT. COUNTRYSIDE LOCATION – DAY (PAST)

JOE and KYM look comfortable and content with each other. Holding hands. – connoting a happy and content relationship

VOICE OVER :
JOE
Dear Stranger, we were happy, in love, the world was ok, but now, I have to go. I never should
 have done it.This is the consequence of my actions. I have struggled with my thoughts for some 
time, but they have driven me to this..


CUT T0 -

EXT. BRIDGE (SUICIDE SPOT) – DAY (PRESENT)

JOE is on the bridge, ready to ‘jump’ and commit suicide. His eyes are teary and is reflective of his life so far including his girlfriend KYM. JOE is re-reading his suicide note (in form of voice over)

JOE is tearing up and sighs, looks down and sees KYM name flashing up on his iPhone. He looks down tentatively and decides to not take the call – he puts the phone back into his pocket.

(JOE steps onto the bridge, closes his eyes and steps off.)

CUT TO –

INT. KYM’S BEDROOM. – DAY

(text is anchored by ‘Two months later’)

KYM is laying on her bed with her laptop open on Facebook. There is a picture of JOE and KYM on her bedside table.

KYM looks at the photograph – closes her eyes in emotional pain.

She gets up, gets her bags – puts a knife in her backpack, and looks at a Facebook one last time
to look at the man who made her boyfriend commit suicide – revenge.

KYM
Karma’s gonna get you.

Wednesday 27 February 2013

Evidence of Time Management and Organisation




I set up a Facebook page named 'Media Production' so communication between the four pupils working on the production was instant, meaning that we can all discuss the production and recent updates on tasks, and obtain the information quickly and efficiently in a media related medium. This will help the group as discussions can be formed on issues where all pupils can have direct input into aspects regarding the production, rather than texting and e-mailing each other individually. This allows us to share ideas and comment on issues outside of lesson time and gives us a medium for instant communication with current modern day technology.

With posts on this page regarding how much work we still had to do with the planning process, we could all clearly see how much we had to do and organise our time efficiently so we didn't fall behind. In my evaluation of my 'Preliminary Task', time management was a key issue highlighted, a consequence of a lack of efficient time management was a continuity error, resulting in the final production looking amateur and not well thought through. A result of this finding within my 'Preliminary Task', I have set up this group to simulate communication, keep an eye on time efficiency and keep delegation of work organised, paying attention to every detail of the film.
Screen Shot from our Facebook group 'Media Production'

Screen shot from our Facebook group 'Media Production'

'Overhaul' Analysis - Student Thriller


Overhaul student thriller from Tom Bailey on Vimeo.

We open the student thriller ‘Overhaul’ with the production logo ‘Black Rose Media’, a name significant in connoting dark passions, which deliberately use the binary oppositions of black and white to connote the familiar conventions of thrillers. After the logo fades, the audience see a black screen for a long period of time (14 seconds) along with the diegetic sound of footsteps conveying the idea of anonymous villains which we expect to see in thrillers which adds a sense of eeriness and ambiguity to the opening, making the audience wonder what’s going to happen rising tensions. We see that the door is part open as we can see some movement within the slit, connoting that we can only see part of a situation. This shot also applies to the ‘rule of thirds’ as the slit is located on the far left third which is a creative and innovate composition of shot. There is no long establishing shot used, just a close up, to make the audience relate to the claustrophobic surroundings. The chiaroscuro lighting conveys a thriller and as the door opens we see an over the shoulder shot with a man stood on the outside in a long beige coat and formal dress such as a tie which connotes wealth in this production. We straight cut to a mid-shot of a young male with his head held low and his eyes tied behind his back - a key indication that he's the victim. His blood stained and mud saturated top juxtaposes the formal wear of the predator. There are a series of what looks like photographs used which use jump cuts to create a sense of disorientation, perhaps these are 'mug' shots for the attacker, for him to keep in a psychotic state. As the young male's movement is shown in a series of images, we see that he has duct tape over his mouth, making him very vulnerable. This particular shot is at the same level as the eye line of the viewer, not only making us sympathise with him, but also making us relate to the character. The audio which is used is industrial rock music, creating a stressful atmosphere to the viewer.


We cut to a long shot of the predator hoisting the victim out of a woodshed in the garden, which is central. There is use of chiaroscuro (low key, high contrast) here to focus all our attention on the action taking place and also to establish the time of day - night time. The harsh beats music continues to disturb the audience and acts as a sound bridge to link all the shots together creating smooth cuts. The camera pans round when the predator drags his victim into the house, the fact that he is not struggling means that he's probably been tortured or hurt previously by the villain, connoting his psychotic and violent behaviour. The door quickly slams behind them symbolising the victim's hopeless situation and we see a close up of this happening, which almost implies that we 'don't know what occurs behind closed doors'. There is mystery and enigma made from this as the audience want to know what's happening to the character we had previously related to, the sound of the door closing creates a definite atmosphere as the audience feel helpless. This occurs again within the next long shot when the curtains close, blocking the action from the outside world, putting the audience in the dark, reinforcing the idea of being trapped, which may suggest that we don't know the full scale of the abuse bound to happen as we're 'in the dark'. A fade here is used effectively as we're in the dark and it only fades the light coming from the window situated on the top, right hand third, in terms of the 'rule of thirds'. This fade acts as an ellipsis edit as a period of time passes before the next scene.
Another close up of the door is used, as we see the predator leaving the house. He's now got an overall on over the top of his jacket, with splatters of blood down the front. This creates more mystery and sympathy for the victim as we do not know exactly what has happened to him but are sure he has suffered violence. The fact that he has an overall on represents him trying to keep his formal clothes clean and perhaps trying to uphold a reputation that he has. The sound track here turns to brief intervals of disturbing noise which sound like drills, this creates unease to the viewer and connotes pain. We pan to the predator opening the woodshed he had previously come from and take out a saw. The sighting of the saw is immediately connected to the previous shot of the victim who we know is still inside the house as he's not left, we fear for the character as the amount of pain and torture that could be inflicted with this 'weapon' is undoubtedly tremendous. We cut to a strange angle in the next shot which connotes meaning to the viewer, whilst the shot is focused on the lamp post covering the right 'third' creating a fantastic composition, our focus is on the character moving below us. Perhaps the cinematographer has tried to connote the idea that the viewer is in danger if they're seen to be watching the predator, and that even though they try to hide (behind a lamp post) they will be found eventually, this is an effective way of trying to captivate the audience. Another fade transition is used here to denote a passage of time, without it being anchored by text. 
This fade transition for a swift and smooth change of scene and location, we are now inside the house. We do not see the fine details of the house to create mystery and enigma but we see a high angled, close-up of a sink at a high angle, as drops of blood dissolve into the water to captivate our attention, we have empathy for the victim who we had related to. Hands are placed into the bowl, which remind me of 'Macbeth' when 'Lady Macbeth' keeps cleaning her hand in her disturbed psyche. This shot also gives the impression that the predator cares more for his own 'look' than the distressed victim who is still perceived to be in the house. An extreme close-up dominates the frame and the amount of glowing red blood in the frame gets increasingly more, creating fear that the victim has died due to blood loss or extreme abuse. Violence and terror has been signified throughout the opening, connoting the genre of the piece. Unlike horrors, we don't actually see any of the gruesome and gory detail in thrillers, we do however have disturbing images and their connotations playing on our minds as we try and 'fill in the blank' and read into the enigmas raised.The blood drains away, symbolising the life of the victim draining away as we watch creating mystery and suspicion as we are not sure as to what action has actually occurred. The intimate sound of the drips remind us of the drips of blood seen previously which creates unease within the audience. The fade following a close-up shot of the villain drying his hands ends this scene nicely as we have another ellipsis edit into the next scene.
As the predator dominates the frame when entering what looks like a living room, tension is created through chiaroscuro lighting with only one light in the central frame. This room looks like it could be potentially cosy and homely, but due to his distasteful life style of abuse and crime, the mise-en-scene is uncomfortable and makes us want to distance ourselves from the villain. Close ups of liquor being poured and a warm fire connotes that the predator is content and that the crime he has just committed seems quite regular, and hasn't affected him mentally in the slightest, which is in itself, quite psychotic. More close-ups follow of cigarettes being lit and food being eaten symbolising a regular night at home with nothing having gone wrong prior to this moment. A fade ends this particular set of of shots and we continue onto full screen titles. These titles are black and white (monochrome binary oppositions) and are of the key principal participants when making the film (students) this also includes the author of the music sound track (Sikth and Tool). The audio of classical piano music continues as a sound bridge over all of these titles connoting that 'all is well and calm' now that the victim is dead, and the predator can rest. The final title is that of the name of the production 'Overhaul'.
On a personal note, there are many contributing factors as to what makes this a successful thriller opening, one of the key attributes being the enigma created through not actually seeing the detail of his proposed death. In my own opening of a thriller, I hope to emulate this principle by creating mystery and enigma by not showing the detail of Joe's death. Other factors include the use of chiaroscuro lighting which has ask influenced me to use this in my piece when Kym is in her room to connote the eerie, tense and depressed atmosphere, and the way in which sympathy is created for the victim. In my own opening I hope to create empathy by showing both Joe and Kym happy together before Joe commits suicide.

Synopsis

When Kym's boyfriend commits suicide after a dreadful incident with gang members, Kym seeks revenge to try and figure out why her boyfriend decided to take his own life and to take down each gang member one by one.

'Sixth Sense' Thriller Analysis

6S Opening from Stephen Adams on Vimeo.


In this post I will be analysing ‘Sixth Sense’, which is a psychological thriller feature film brought out in 1999 by director M. Night Shyamalan. In this essay I will analyse the setting, characters, sound, titles, camera work and editing to examine it for thriller conventions.

This film opens with the studio logos of the film producers (Hollywood Pictures and Spyglass Entertainment) who are of great importance to the creation of the film.



We fade to full screen monochromatic titles in a serif font, which are binary oppositions (white text on black screen), a frequent occurrence in thrillers, immediately connoting the genre of this feature film. When the producer’s logos first appear, various eerie drones begin on the sound track. These titles are more classic than other titles, perhaps to display the intelligence needed to understand the slow pace psychological based movie. There are a series of slow full screen titles, listing many of the important contributors to the film, such as executive producers and the director of photography, this lasts for a period of 3 minutes, a long time for the audience to watch full screen titles, connoting that this is not an action movie, and concentration is needed to understand and appreciate the detail within the film.



The titles also track forward slowly, with the individual letters bordering out away from the centre to imply to slow movement from 'normal life' to the disfunctionality yet to come.
After the last fade at the end of the title sequence, we start to see light, tinted orange situated in the hot spot of the lower most third to the left which applies to the 'rule of thirds' which makes the audience pay attention to these particular hot spots, and also makes terrific composition within cinematography. The slow light, brightening the darkness acts as a diegetic fade as we start with a extreme close-up to start the scene, this choice of shot is unusual as there is usually a long establishing shot, but this choice of shot has specially been edited as the opening shot to give a claustrophobic, uncomfortable feel, which sets the 'on edge' atmosphere to this opening nicely. This enclosed space creates a sense of mystery to the audience as we cannot see what may be lurking in the shadows, or indeed around the room in which the camera is situated. The bare light bulb itself is tinted orange to give the impression of an old, archaic setting. With this light taking a duration of 12 seconds to fully light up, the chiaroscuro (low key, high contrast) lighting creates tension which emphasised with the soundtrack which has been creating an eerie atmosphere throughout the opening with a series of sound bridges.



At the end of this twelve second period there is an echo of a door being open, evidently telling the audience that we're in a large room but we can only see a small fraction of the setting, creating mystery and tension. 

We cut to a long shot of an attractive, sophisticated woman in high heels and a long dress coming down the stairs, the sound of her footsteps have been forwarded within the sound mix to enhance the atmosphere previously stated. As the lady walks towards the wine rack (towards the camera) the camera is being focus pulled so the depth of field changes, until the wine rack and her face is finally in focus, this enables us to stay on this shot for a long duration, connoting the slow pace of the psychological story. The camera tracks downwards enabling us to see many wines within the cellar but the wooden parallel panels in between the bottles reminds us of bars, such as the ones in jails, perhaps acting as an indicator for crime in future scenes, this idea is also common in other thrillers such as 'Face/Off' which again, reminds us of the genre of the movie.



The camera zooms in slightly to a close-up shot just as the non-verbal codes of the lady indicates that she's scared with the widened eyes and slight frown on her face as she turns away from the camera, when we immediately cut to a long shot of the room. The idea of bars and crime is also prominent here too as there are shadows of pillars being created through lighting techniques. There is also a shadow of the lady in between two of the pillars/bars, enclosing her, from a light situated on the left side of her, which creates a sense of unease as we see the lady being trapped. As she is on the left third of the screen it is impossible not to notice the large empty space ahead of her, and as her non-verbal codes of her arms around her body for comfort imply that she's scared, this space connotes isolation and loneliness.



We cut to the opposite side of the grey cellar in time to see her quickly run up the stairs, we get the impression that she's scared of something within the room, although we can't see what, creating mystery within the scene.

There is a small ellipsis edit used as we cut to the scenery which juxtaposes the previous scene. The many candles creating a warm and inviting glow invite the audience to feel 'at home' and comfortable, and within this close-up there are many 'Thank You' cards evidently made by children - made obvious through the bright choice of colours and the artistic skills commonly associated by young children. In the shot that follows, the close-up shows a man in an expensive looking suit holding a glass of wine which connotes wealth and that these two characters are well off in terms of their economic status. The lady brings them both a jacket each, even though there is a fire, emphasis to the audience that it's late at night as it's cold in the house. A series of 'shot-reverse-shots' are used between the two actors in the two-shot and the prestigious award sitting on an expensive chair in front of them. An innovative shot is created as the camera tracks froward slightly to show both the actor's faces in the mirror of the award whilst the female actress is reading out the detail of it, this narrative exposition gives the audience key information about the male character - that he's an established award winning child psychologist who has dedicated his life to his work.



This narrative exposition within the script writing makes the diologue seem naturalistic, giving the audience key information to digest before using it in future scenes to twist the plot to create a good thriller.

With every 'hero' within thrillers, they have their flaws, perhaps his overworking and obsession with his work is his flaw, and may have disastrous implications withing future scenes. Within a series of shot-reverse-shots we notice that the 'hero' of this movie is around 40 years old, male, with flaws and this is typically what we would expect from an opening of a thriller within characterisation of the actors. The intimate glimpses of behavour between the actors is disrupted by a dramatic change in angle - a long shot, which almost makes the audience think that they're being watched. The sound recording of the dialogue is still clearly heard as it's been edited in post production so we understand more key details within the script.

Another ellipsis edit is used to denote the change of scene - this time the bedroom, and the chiaroscuro lighting is present again, perhaps indicating that the 'equilibrium' is going to be dramatically over turned by an upcoming event, this theory into stories has been stated by Tzvetan Todorov who stated that all stories had an equilibrium, a disruption (crime) and then a revised equilibrium. It is common for thrillers to have a dramatic crime committed at the start of the film. The shadow appears again as the light at the back of the male actor is switched on, indicating that the pair may be being watched. Due to their drunken state, they do not immediately notice the open window and smashed telephone on the floor when they enter the room, but do so when undressing. A 'point of view' hand held camera shot is used to display the image of the broken telephone and tracks to the smashed window, telling the audience that someone has broken in through the window as much of the glass is in the inside of the bedroom. The 'point of view' tracking shot is used for the audience to understand the anxiety and confusion running through the heads of the two actors.



Immediately after we see this, a long two-shot is used to show a shadow moving on the screen, indicating that their is a body moving behind the camera. After effects such as SFX have been used to create a small gust of wind which moves a long with the moving image of the shadow, this makes the visual more effective, which is also aided by the short, panicked wimper by the lady in the dress who quickly puts her back towards the wall and raised her hands to her face indicting her distress.

The slow zooms and the hand held tracking shots which come next create a tentative and atmospheric atmosphere which keeps the audience gripped to the scene. As the tracking is slow, it makes the audience think wildly about what could be in the en suite bathroom. The non diegetic sound track builds up to create slight panic within the audience as we first see several items of clothing on the floor, then a pair of feet, and finally a body. We do not expect to see a semi-dressed, distressed, psychotic man in the bathroom looking anxious himself.



We immediately realise the distorted mental state the man is in, and relate this to the information acquired in the previous scene - that he's a child psychologist. The eerie, mysterious soundtrack continues as the confused Doctor stares at the man in disbelief, but is seen to be relatively calm about a stranger in his bathroom, which, we realise, is the reason why he has won an outstanding award. The series of close-up shot-reverse-shots and the increased editing speed gives a sense of urgency to the situation, relative to the action being shown. The intruder looks very distressed with his right arm wrapped around his stomach feeling his left arm for comfort before moving towards the Doctor who is forced to sit on the bed causing panic to his wife which is shown with close-up shots. As he approaches there is a slight sound spike to create a tense atmosphere. The Doctor is on the bed, which now places him in a vulnerable position as the camera angle is high looking down on him, as the intruder gets increasingly more over whelmed and upset about his personal life. As the patient describes his situation, of a single parent family, with a possible mood disorder, the camera tracks side ways for both male actors giving the sense of the psychologist in deep thought, creating the meaning that, he is trying hard to understand and remember the details of the patient, but his thinking may be disrupted by the influence of the alcohol he had previously drank. The Doctor tries his best to help the patient calm down by stating numerous good traits about the character, but in a moment of unpredictable psychotic behaviour, he gets shot. The gun was pointed directly at the camera and sparks were added to create dramatic effect and we quickly cut to the mid shot of the Doctor falling back onto the bed having been shot.



This image is accompanied by a diegetic scream of his wife in terror. We see another mid shot of the patient who is still pointing the camera forwards, who brings the gun to his head as the camera tracks side ways, so the audience cannot see the suicide of the ill patient, but we hear diegetic SFX of the splutter of blood and the bullet entering his skull.

Thriller Conventions


Using Vladimir Propp's (a Russian critic who examined hundreds of folk tales and wrote a book named 'Morphology of the Folk Tale) theory of narrative functions and character roles within stories, there are several character roles which occur multiple times within Thrillers which I have investigated.

Propp stated that there were 8 character roles:

- The Villain
- The Hero
- The Donor (who provides an object with some magic property)
- The Helper (who aids the hero)
- The Princess (the sought person) - a reward for the hero and object of the villains schemes
- Her Father (who rewards the hero)
- The Dispatcher (who sends the hero on his way)
- The False Hero

'The Villain' such as 'Le Chiffre' (Mads Mikkelsen) from the James Bond film 'Casino Royale'. This character is a middle aged man (common convention of villains in thrillers) with a slash across his face connoting danger. He is seen as an equal match for James Bond, because he has high status within his profession, he's male, got a lot of money and attracts the opposite sex, this equal match makes thrillers interesting as the result of the conflict is unknown.



In the American thriller 'Se7en' Detective Mills (Brad Pitt) is the helper who aids the hero to achieve his goal, they are often on the 'right' side of morality and are usually the same gender as the 'hero' as to not create conflict between the 'hero' and the 'princess'.



Claude Levi-Strauss looked at narrative structure in terms on binary oppositions such as 'Good v Evil', 'Moral v Immoral' and 'Earth v Space'. These are opposites that reveal the structure of media texts and Levi-Struss looked at specific genres such as Science Fiction films where binary oppositions (Earth v Space) are created by the narrative. Within the film 'Face/Off' directed by John Woo, there are the binary oppositions of 'Black v White' in the opening titles and 'Police v Punishment' as there is a covert anti-terrorism team facing a terrorist organisation.



Tzvetan Todorov was a Bulgarian structuralist linguist commenting on narrative form from the 1960s onwards. Toderov suggested that plots began with an equilibrium (a happy scenario) where potentially opposing forces are balanced. This is then later disrupted by an event (eg. an extreme crime such as murder), this is then solved in some way so that order can be restored and there is a revised equilibrium.
In many thriller openings including 'Face/Off' and 'Se7en' a disruption has occurred in the beginning of the film, sometimes to create a motive for other characters later on in the film. (In 'Face/Off' the hero's son was killed in his arms by a terrorist, this provided a personal motive for the 'hero' to capture the villain, however personal attachment to a job may be a potential flaw to the character).

Preliminary Task Evaluation

‘The Preliminary Production Task’ allowed me to expand my knowledge of film conventions and learn new techniques such as the ‘180 degree rule’ and the ‘short-reverse-shot rule’ which has will help me in my AS opening of a thriller task. Without incorporating these key rules when filming specific scenes (eg. a conversation where both the 180 degree rule and short reverse shots are used) then the viewer will be disorientated and the key aspects of the film will not come across well and will confuse the audience (except when these rules are broken to connote meaning where disillusion is required).

I have also learnt different shot types such as extreme close ups and establishing shots to set the scene and create a dramatic effects. In the case of close ups and extreme close ups, we are able to see the detail on the actor’s face, and as we are not usually so close to a person in reality, a disturbing and dramatic effect is made.

I think the editing went well in my preliminary task, as I cut clips of the footage to create ‘match-on-action’ shots where actor Tom Bailey, walks through a door at the very start of this production. Straight cuts are used to establish parallel timing (the phone call at Tom’s end of the phone is in real time and is happening at the same time when Jacob picks up the phone). I have used straight cuts to connote meaning, rather than showing Tom walking down a corridor for a long period of time, we show him walking for a short amount of time to denote that he has walked along the corridor. We only see Tom walking for a duration of 5 seconds before cutting to a close up of his pocket. If we showed all this action in real time, then the audience would get bored easily.

When filming, we filmed many different shots so each member of the group could use different shots and create their own, unique preliminary production. This was a strength with our group because some footage was damaged in terms of sound being ruined, or members of the public coming into shot by mistake, the variety of shots meant that we could choose our shots carefully and use other footage. Sadly, in our production there is a continuity error, one thing we will have to look out for in our AS production. We had to re-film some footage as there were sound problems as we couldn’t hear one of our actor’s dialogue clearly, so we had to re film the scene, with the actor wearing different clothes. This could be prevented in our AS production by efficient use of time management skills, planning exactly when we are going to film specific scenes.

The positive aspects of working as a crew on this task was that we delegated different people to operate different aspects of the technology such as camera operation and clapper board. However, the negative aspects of working with a crew are that there could be some disagreements within the group which may negatively affect the finished production. This could be overcome by delegating roles within the crew such as ‘director’ who would ultimately make the final decisions of the production.

The disagreements that arose within our group included discussion of the composition of certain shots, but this was resolved quickly so we could continue filming. In future productions, a shot list will be composed so there are no disagreements regarding shot types.

I have learnt many things that will help me in my AS opening of a thriller production. This ranges from learning new filming techniques and shots such as ‘over the shoulder shots’ and editing methods such as transitions, fades and colour correcting. I have learnt that timing is everything when editing, especially with shot reverse shots, when the cuts have to run smoothly. I had to play the footage frame by frame to get the timing just right, so the footage didn’t jerk and look odd to the viewer.

I played the part of cinematographer in this preliminary task, filming the footage, I think this went reasonably well, but I think in me AS final production I will film differently, not only by creating shot lists to make sure I know exactly what to film, but I will change exposure and shutter speed to give a more dramatic effect to my work; especially as it’s a thriller and the chiaroscuro lighting effect will make the shots more cinematic. Even though I can use colour correction on editing software, I would prefer to use lighting on my shoots to help create effective shots, for example, I may use back lighting to create low key, high contrast lighting, which commonly occurs in the thriller/horror genre. I may also use a non-diegetic voice over and sound tracks to create mood and empathy for my lead characters, so the impact of my climax within the piece is effective. Overall, I think this preliminary production went well, but I hope to improve in my next production by looking at different audio techniques (soundtracks), taking a closer look at composition of shots (applying my knowledge of the ‘rule of thirds) and encouraging use of other technical elements such as lighting and sound.

Monday 11 February 2013

Introduction


My name is Emma Taylor and I am a Media student at 'Bacup and Rawtenstall Grammar School Sixth Form'. This blog is to show the evidence for my coursework for my AS Portfolio for making an opening of a thriller. Thank you.